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Dead on the Tracks

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I never even heard the shot. As I lay where I fell and the edges of my vision began to fade, I thought of how much better everything would have been if I had never met her. Her, and that damn suitcase...
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um, what ^they said... killer!

...and I can imagine this shot and your voice-over being the opening scene, then going back and filling in the story.

Ah, such an ignominious end! ...very effective ...I can feel the gravel on my face.